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All that remains is an empty lot

Back in early 1994, I wrote one of the most interesting stories of my career with the old Honolulu Star-Bulletin. It described an abandoned view home on an acre of land at the top of Ahuimanu that had fallen into ruin, its owner missing for years, and anyone with a potential legal claim to the property disclaiming any interest.

The kids in the neighborhood called it the haunted house of Ahuimanu.

I learned about the situation from a friend who lived nearby and had tried to make an offer to buy the property, going to great lengths in an attempt to find the recorded owner, or someone able to make a deal on his behalf. He quickly hit a dead end. The owner, a local man about 45, had purchased the house via an agreement of sale which had never been finally paid off. The seller, then living in Australia, declined to get involved, saying there were family friends involved.

After several interviews and spending time digging through public records, I drove up to look at the place myself.

I can vividly remember the moment I hopped a fence and entered the property, now more than 30 years ago. I have photos somewhere. The problem is finding them. That’s for another day.

But I sat down immediately afterwards and jotted down my impressions, and found them in an old archived computer file.

Visited Jan 26, 1994.

Low wrought iron gate. Now wired shut. Chicken wire laid across a surrounding rock wall, now intertwined with plants and shrubs.

Tall grasses are growing on the roof, where trees have also sprouted and grown 10-15 feet tall.

The garage is burned out. On the right as you approach from the street is the rusted and stripped hulk of an MG convertible sports car, license plate intact. On the left and to the rear of the garage is a mound of rubble. Car parts, old beer cans, etc.

A hose is coiled up, but now burned. At the entrance to the garage is another hose, this one looking new and bright green. [A clue–if unused as long as the house, it would not look like this, and it would be overgrown.]

You exit the garage though a door at the right rear. To the right is a door into the former kitchen. It is trashed. Everything inside is charred black, burned in at least two prior fires. Inside the door are the remains of a burned-out washer-dryer set, surrounded by mounds of newspapers, charred, partly burned, now matted down into paper mache.

Straight out the back of the garage is the pool, which sits at the open end of a U-shaped courtyard formed by the house. The pool is covered with a thick layer of green algae. A frog, or something, jumps back into the water.

To the left of the pool are the remains of a wooden bridge that extended across a small stream to the back yard, a field that probably takes up most of the acre of land. The bridge is now collapsed, wood rotted.

Back inside: newspapers stewn throughout are dated 1976 through 1980. I don’t see any beyond that date.

In the living room: large openings across the entire far wall where formerly picture windows were. A beautiful view. Standing at the window openings, you view right across to Kualoa Point and Mokolii.

A stone fireplace and chimney are built-in to the left of the windows.

On the other side of the room, there are the burned out remains of what appears to be a baby grand piano. Top layer is a metal frame, with the sets of wires showing.

On the left of the living room, facing the windows, is a door that goes over to the bedrooms.

At the doorway, another pile of papers. Among them, one set of partly burned papers appear to be part of a book.

I pick up the top page, and print jumps out: “Such is the forgotten man.”

Chicken skin.

I even paid a private investigator to do a basic records check. They found nothing.

No credit history in the owner’s name in any of the credit bureaus.

No drivers license.

No vehicle registration.

A nationwide search of drivers licenses turned up nothing during the last five years.

No criminal records, nothing, either as victim or complainant.

No missing person report.

His family said they had no information about his whereabouts.

But while writing this, I did another online search, and “Find a Grave” came up with new information.

It seems that the owner died in Honolulu in August 2012, 18 years after my story was published.

Court records confirm that he died intestate, without a will. His sister was appointed the personal representative of the estate, which owed no estate taxes.

Real estate records show the agreement of sale was cancelled after his death, and title went back to the former wife of the original seller, who had since also died.

The lot remains empty, according to city records. The last entry was a permit for demolition in March 1995, which listed the City & County of Honolulu as owner. Value of the job was reported as $9,800.

End of story, for now. I’ll have to look at the probate court file to see if there’s any information about the quiet death of this forgotten man.

Read the original story (“Mystery shrouds this old house“) and a folo story published a year later after the city bulldozed the site.

Bear with me….

I’m feeling guilty about failing to post anything substantive for several days. It’s not for lack of trying.

I’m still trying to track, report, and explain details of the remaining bits and pieces of the Miske case. Some may have interest on their own, others reflect back and help interpret what’s come before.

But when I sit down to write what should be a straightforward post describing a recent development in the case, I find myself involuntarily adding context and detail based on prior disclosures and the hundreds or thousands of case documents I’ve gathered over the years. Interesting stuff, but then the writing bogs down as I try to pry the recent happenings from the unnecessarily added details. But what details are “unnecessary?” What are useful additions to help explain the events? I’m proceeding by trial and error, and have a bunch of false starts to show for it, definitely not efficient, but the best I’ve come up with for now.

And then there’s another issue. What’s “the story” in these recent sub-plots? Are they primarily of interest in themselves, or because there’s something new that they reveal about Miske or his organization? I’ve tripped over this several times recently as I trying to push a couple of these stories out as blog posts.

Here’s one of the things I’ve tripped over. Miske knew that he had a daughter, a bit younger than his late son, Caleb. Different mothers. I don’t recall seeing any mention of her or her mother in any prior Miske proceedings. She’s a Kaneohe woman raised by her mom and stepfather. I’m not going to use her name here because it’s not clear if she had any knowledge of the criminal activities of her biological father. It appears that Miske made an error in reporting the year she was born. If so, what does that show? Was he trying to conceal her identity, or did he have so little contact that he kind of guessed at the year? I don’t know. But it’s clear that her story would be interesting to hear.

In any case, I’ll try to take a bite-size piece out of these various bits and pieces and get it posted soon.

And so it goes on a cloudy Wednesday morning in Kahala.

Stay tuned.

Spoiler alert–My comments on the latest novel by Michael Connelly

Fair warning. If you’re looking forward to reading Michael Connelly’s latest, “Resurrection Walk,” done read further. You can return and read my rant later, after you’ve finished the book.

If you’re read it already, or don’t plan on reading it but just want to see what I’m ticked off about, then feel free to continue.

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Trying to climb out of another rabbit hole

I’ve been working on another Miske-related story for about a month now. Too long. Somehow, it has been extra difficult to wrestle into publishable form. And that is very, very frustrating.

All because there’s been a lull in the court action as the trial, scheduled to begin in January, gets closer, and attorneys have to be preparing a round or two of pretrial motions, challenges to categories of evidence, and hone their planned legal strategies. That has left me time to look at less obvious stories to tell that I’ve got on my long “To Do” list.

This one started with a surprising tidbit that I found buried in an obscure court filing. It involved a violent incident that, at the time it happened several years ago, appeared to have no relation at all Mike Miske or his alleged racketeering enterprise. The newly revealed link back to Miske seemed, to me, of interest and worth reporting.

My first thought was that it would be simple. Describe the new information. Remind people of the earlier case and why it made news. Explain how we now know it is somehow related to the Miske case. And then also explain that the substance of that relationship has not been revealed.

But I didn’t have enough to fill out a story other than the intriguing new connection. So I started research the context of the original violent incident. This involved digging into the background of several other related incidents, figuring out how they were related to each other, and hoping that I would stumble onto an “aha!” moment when the pieces would fall into place and the relation to the Miske case would be obvious. I was wrong, but I didn’t know it when I started down that rabbit hole.

Now, several weeks later, I’ve talked to a bunch of people, been cursed at by a lawyer for who-knows-what, I know a lot more about those other incidents, too much, really, but still know very little about what they could have had to do with Miske and his co-defendants.

I intended on taking a breather today because it’s my birthday. But this unfinished story is nagging at me. I hate to invest this much time in an admitted tangent without ending up with a story worth sharing. I’ve now dragged the project back to the drawing board where I’ll try again to tell the story directly, avoiding complications, sidestepping the fascinating but unnecessary details, and trying to see what how the story looks when cut it back to the basics. I really should walk away from it for a few days and let the pieces slowly fall into place in my mind. But it’s created this mental itch that I really want to keep scratching until its gone.

But, hey, it’s been another year and I’m still here. That’s something to celebrate.